Friday 22 November 2013

Story Board Plan

Youth – Daughter 4:10

0-13: shot of the woods, looking up to the sky through branches ‘youth – daughter’ appears and fades. Tilt down to normal level.

13-18: Shadows settle on the place, that you left./ pan round the wood and settle on Lily, ex long shot.

20-24: Our minds are troubled by the emptiness./ cut to long shot, medium shot, close up, extreme close up. Tear rolls down cheek

26-30: Destroy the middle, it's a waste of time./ Lily turns head right, pan left to Wes with head facing left. Zoom out quickly to long shot showing them holding hands

31-35: From the perfect start to the finish line./ Wes and Lilt fight, Wes pushes her away. Close up on Lily’s hands holding his shirt, slow motion. Long shot of him walking away and Lily falling, slow motion.

38-42: And if you're still breathing, you're the lucky ones./ long shot of Lily on the floor from the back.

44-49: 'Cause most of us are heaving through corrupted lungs./ extreme close up of Lily’s ribs from behind to show her breathing.

50-54: Setting fire to our insides for fun/ Close up of Lily’s face from the front whilst lying on the floor with smoke coming out of her mouth.

56-1:00: Collecting names of the lovers that went wrong/ still a close up of Lily’s face as she gets up. Extreme close up of Lily’s hand as she pushes herself up. Close up of Lily’s knees and she gets up.

1:02-1:04: The lovers that went wrong./ long shot from the front as Lily stands up and walks towards the camera.

1:05-1:16: instrumental/ flash back of Lily and Wes in happier times whilst flashing back to the long shot of Lily walking towards the camera up to a midshot.

1:17-1:21: We are the reckless, We are the wild youth/ still flash back of Lily and Wes, smoking and drinking. Back to the midshot of Lily.

1:22-1:25: Chasing visions of our futures/ mid shot of Lily from the front as she turns and runs in the opposite direction. Close up of feet running through the woods.

1:29-1:33: One day we'll reveal the truth/ close up of feet as Lily stops running. Medium close up of Lily as she stops running (shocked face).

1:34-1:38: That one will die before he gets there./ pan from Lily to Wes. Lily goes to touch Wes but he disappears.

1:41-1:46: And if you're still bleeding, you're the lucky ones./ tracking shot of Lily walking up the stairs

1:47-1:53: 'Cause most of our feelings, they are dead and they are gone./ close up of Lily’s hand opening the door and then turning the bath tap on.

1:53-1:58: We're setting fire to our insides for fun./ close up of Lily setting fire to some pictures of her and Wes.

2:00-2:04: Collecting pictures from the flood that wrecked our home,/ extreme close up of the burning picture.

2:05-2:08: It was a flood that wrecked this home./ slow motion of the picture being dropped in the bath water.

2:12-2:14: And you caused it,/ long shot from behind of lily climbing in the bath from behind.

2:19-2:21: And you caused it,/  flash back establishing shot of Wes running up to push Lily on the rope swing.

2:25-2:27: And you caused it./ flash back high angle, long shot of Wes pushing Lily on the rope swing. Straight cut to a normal long shot of Lily and Wes hugging on the rope swing.

2:33-2:38: Well I've lost it all, I'm just a silhouette,/ long shot of lily on the rope swing, zoom to a mid shot of lily on the rope swing.

2:39-2:44: A lifeless face that you'll soon forget,/ medium close up of Lily's face, super impose a flashing skull over her face.

2:46-2:50: My eyes are damp from the words you left,/ extreme close up off Lily’s makeup stained eyes.

2:51-2:57: Ringing in my head, when you broke my chest./ speeded up backwards mid shot of lily frantically shaking her head.

2:58-3:03: Ringing in my head, when you broke my chest./ slow motion extreme close up of Lily’s hair flipping around. Back to the speeded up mid shot of Lily frantically shaking her head. Still thin the mid shot lily stops still and looks at the camera.

3:04-3:10: And if you're in love, then you are the lucky one,/ close up of Lily on the right side of the screen miming the lyrics.

3:11-3:15: 'Cause most of us are bitter over someone./ same shot focused to the background where Wes if stood.

3:17-3:21: Setting fire to our insides for fun,/ back to Lily in focus as she mimes the line.

3:23-3:30: To distract our hearts from ever missing them, but I'm forever missing him./ focus to the background where Wes has gone, then back to Lily in focus as Wes comes and stands behind her, she turns and he disappears.

3:35-3:37: And you caused it,/ front mid shot of lily getting in the bath. Slow motion

3:41-3:44: And you caused it,/ bird eye mid shot of lily putting her head under the water.

3:48-3:50 and you caused it,/ Close up birds eye shot of Lily’s face in the bath as she opens her eyes.

3:51-4:10: instrumental/ pan back round from Lily and tilt up to the original frame and then fade out.